Tuesday, 31 January 2012

A Picnicker


Life's a picnic, I am a picnicker
Why do I behave I belong to here

Why the baggage of past do I carry
Why the newer things do I parry

Why do I worry of the future
And not the today that I nurture

Why do I tie myself to chains
When I know it will not make any gains

Why do I kill my heart
And seek solace in some art

Why can't I set my spirit free
And yet be silent as a tree

Why can't I just celebrate this picnic
And promise myself never to panic

Life's a picnic, I am a picnicker
Why do I behave I belong to here

5 comments:

  1. Good one. Maduve hatra bandhanga hinge ella poetry baritaara :)

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    1. Ganapa, please don't try to pradeepize my image. I will not tolerate that. :)

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  2. Liked the thought process in this one maga. One sincere comment; try writing them in Kannada/Hindi. I feel anything other than English would get more weightage to the feelings of the poem. It's a known issue with the English sentence formation.

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    1. आपने फरमाइश की और हम हाज़िर हुए
      दोस्त तो हमारे दिल के बादशाह है
      उनकी बात हम टाले भी तो कैसे
      उनकी यादों के सायें में तो हमारा गुज़ारा होता है

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